P5: Write an original article for a TV broadcast
Here is my final piece ready to be published to Newsround!
Sub Edited Story by Kian Whinn on Scribd
Below is my Newsround story..
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P6: Use sub-editing techniques to finalise article for broadcast
This task was to get somebody to proof read my article, and sub edit it so i could have a final perfected news story. Here are the proof-reads.
Here is the first draft of my original news story
News Story Script by Kian Whinn on Scribd
Above are the sub-edits which helped to structure and word my final piece (above in P5)
Here is my finished article video.
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Here are the links to the codes and guidelines I will be looking at:
Below is my PowerPoint comparing my article to these articles and explaining my reasons why for each: